Friday, May 23, 2008

Chapter 9

No characters to follow; they come and go and don't return; how about the boy he mentioned earlier on who worked for him?

* I don't like that I don't know Mike. I want readers to know me

pg 126: beautiful, poor kids (reminds me of Tankai kids), "underneath I was black like everyone else."

*I remember Paulino when we finally convinced him to go to the hospital for his foot

pg 139: a potentialy heart-rending scene ends "It almost made me cry."

Theme? I realized I was selfish in Kalambayi...?

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