*so, I should research the first PC books, capture that spirit of JFK, and compare it to us
Erdman flips out at the pesticide in the river
she pulls the placenta out of the womb! and all we get is "It seems quite possible that I'm about to yank out some major piece of Mendjeta." What? That's it?
Ferke market with Abi
pg 124: she uses few scenes but instead generalizes, glosses over
* flipped carcasses of cars along road
given a dog - rejected it
*kuku!
grunts of approval
*Juliaun Matteus
anti-migrant president/government
Erdman accepts dog
(she is all over the place...)
so she obviously does not believe in scenes or dialogue, action even - interesting. I guess that's a reminder that there are many ways to tell a story (though I just get frustrated with this one)
Ah, is this a more scientific-minded writer, like a expect the ethnographers to be?
super woman chick lit?
pg 133: cries when one of her little friends returns - chic lit
mill arrives, pestles stop, mill breaks, pestles return
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